The Seven Commandments

1. Whatever goes upon two legs is an enemy.

2. Whatever goes upon four legs, or has wings, is a friend.

3. No animal shall wear clothes.

4. No animal shall sleep in a bed.

5. No animal shall drink alcohol.

6. No animal shall kill another animal.

7. All animals are equal.

 

1. • This rule is a good rule for the animals to live by because anything with two legs and hands are humans.

• At one point in the story, the birds were offended by this time because they have two legs. But, no this will not forced any problems in the future.

2. •This is a good rule for the animals to live by because most animals have four legs and have wings.

• This rule will not foresee a problem in future because this rule is correct for the animals other rules.

3. •This rule is a good rule because no animals should be wearing human clothes anyways.

• This rule will foresee a problem in the future because Mollie loves to wear ribbons but ribbon is a type of clothing.

4. •This rule is a good rule because no animal should be sleeping in a bed anyways.

• This rule will foresee a problem in the future because the pigs are now sleeping in the beds without sheets because they changed the rule.

5. •This rule is a very good rule because animals should never drink alcohol even if they have a rule or not.

• This rule will not foresee a problem in the future because the animals are not interested in drinking the alcohol.

6. •This rule is a good rule because the animals need to work with each other instead of killing each other because they are against the humans not each other.

• This rule will foresee a problem in the future because the cat is still wanting to eat Moses.

7. • This rule is a really good rule but the pigs aren’t following this rule correctly.

• This rule will foresee a problem in the future because the pigs think they are the big leader and think they shouldn’t have to do any work at all. They believe they are more important than every animal in the farm.

The Las Vegas Shooting Article

  • Author’s of this article: Malachy Browne, Drew Jordan, Nicole Fineman, and Chris Cirillo.
  • Title of article: “Multiple Weapons Found in Las Vegas Gunman’s Hotel Room”
  • Name of magazine: New York Times
  • Date article was published: OCT. 2, 2017
  • Web address: https://www.nytimes.com/2017/10/02/us/las-vegas-shooting.html

 

  • Discuss the effectiveness of the headline in summarizing the story and getting the reader’s attention: The effectiveness of the headline to get the readers attention was that there was multiple weapons found in the gunman’s hotel room(the guns he used to shoot at the concert).
  • Who: Stephen Paddock (gunman).
  • What: Deadliest gun shooting of U.S. history.
  • When: October 1, 2017.
  • Where: Las Vegas, Nevada.
  • Why: Stephen had developed depression from losing too much money.
  • How: Stephen had fired gunshots from the Mandalay Bay Resort towards the Jason Aldean concert at the Route 91 Harvest Festival.
  • Of all the 5 “W’s” and “H” I believe the “What” answer is the most important because this tells us that this shooting was the worst shooting by far in the United States.
  • Is it international, national, or local? This event was national.
  • What is its impact? How many people were affected by it? The impact of this event will affect tourism, the more people that have seen these news will no longer visit Las Vegas because of the mass shooting. People were affected by it by losing 59 people, and 527 injured.
  • Briefly state the main idea or thesis presented in this article: The main idea of this article was that they have found the guns the gunman was using and they have found himself lying on the floor unresponsive.
  • Do you believe he author did this effectively? Why? Yes, I believe that the authors of this article made this effectively because they put the most important facts in the beginning of the article and the least important at the end of the article.

 

  • Did the article come from a wire service: Yes
  • Who are the sources in the article itself? Policeman, president, and the Islamic State.
  • List one quote that made the article sound more reliable: “Our unity cannot be shattered by evil, our bonds cannot be broken by violence.” said President Trump, speaking at the White House.

 

  • What was the most surprising/interesting thing you found out by reading this article? The most surprising thing I found out about this article was the amount of people dead and injured.
  • What question(s) do you have after reading this article? My question is; What was Paddock aiming for? Why would he put his anger on the people?
  • What would you like to learn more about? I would like to learn more about why Paddock decided to shoot up a concert and kill and injure so many people.

 

Fiona the Hippo Article

The author of this article is by Rachel Syme. The name of this article is “Hooray for Fiona the Hippo, Our Bundle of Social-Media Joy”. This article comes from The New York Times. She published it on November 25, 2017. The web address for this article is https://www.nytimes.com/2017/11/25/style/Fiona-the-hippo.html

The article brings the reader’s attention because Fiona is a famous baby hippo that was born premature. The article is about a famous premature baby hippo, Fiona. She was born premature and needed help right away and couldn’t breathe or nurse on her own. Fiona will be 12-months-old on January 24th. Fiona was born at  Cincinnati Zoo in Cincinnati, Ohio. Fiona is famous because she was the first ever hippo to survive being premature. She got through this by being helped by the veterinarians and employees helping her breathe and being by her side 24/7. I think out of all the five “W’s” and “H”, the “What” is the most important because it tells what the article is all about. This event was national. People were surprised of how Fiona had survived being premature. The whole country heard about Fiona because she is one of a kind. The main idea about this article is that Fiona the Hippo was the first ever hippo to survive being born too premature and she went viral all over the country. I think the author did not put the facts from most important to least important.

Yes, this article came from a wire service. Some sources in the article are Michelle Curley, who has a Fiona tattoo on the back of her neck, and Mifflin Harcourt, the zoo director. A quote from the article “I feel like I represent Beyoncé,” said the Cincinnati zoo’s vice president of marketing. “People fly across the world to just catch a glimpse.”

The one interesting thing I found out about Fiona was that she was six weeks premature and she survived it. The normal weight for a full term hippo is 55 between 120 lbs. She only weighed 29 and birth. My question after reading this article is; What is the percentage of surviving being born 6 weeks premature for hippos? I would like to learn what Fiona would do everyday.

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